Monday, November 26, 2007

two angles on campaign postcard

I was hoping for some crit on my postcard revision. Again, I made two versions and can't decide which is better. Any opinions?


4 comments:

Valerie said...

Oh my gosh! I love it! Dirty tub water is exactly what you needed. That said, I think the second version is better. I'm not exactly sure why... Maybe it's a little bit less crowded down at the bottom, or maybe the perspective just looks a little bit more natural. But that's the one I prefer.

Dave The Game said...

I like the second one as well. It's easier to tell at first glance what it is that we're looking at. Great job on revising.

m4rk said...

you've done a great redesign here. i prefer the one where the rubber ducky isn't hiding behind the info bar. i think he deserves to be seen.

Laura M said...

Thanks everyone. I eventually went with option 2. Someone commented to me that the perpective of the first one was strange if you didn't see your feet in the tub. After that, it bothered me too much.