Showing posts with label revision crit. Show all posts
Showing posts with label revision crit. Show all posts

Tuesday, December 11, 2007

running out of time

Can anyone offer insight on my jeans brochure? Amy says that the photos are better, but I haven't improved the design concept. I'm not really sure what that means. Do you see any major flaws with how I am approaching this? Thanks!!



Monday, November 26, 2007

two angles on campaign postcard

I was hoping for some crit on my postcard revision. Again, I made two versions and can't decide which is better. Any opinions?


blue moon v. white moon

I can't decide which of these revisions to the opening spread of my classification project is better. Any opinions?